Talk:Endar

PNA
An anon posted the pna with "grammar" in the edit summary, though I am not entirely sure what the grammatical problem is, or why they did not fix it themselves if they were aware of it. Anyway, anyone know the problem?--31dot 19:06, April 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * The tenses were mixed and were terrible. I've fixed those.  And removed the pna.  Someday people will figure out how to do things on their own :) -- sulfur 19:10, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Sometimes it takes another pair of eyes.... :) --31dot 19:11, April 8, 2010 (UTC)
 * Looks a bit better, but the paragraph still reads choppy to me. And sometimes while I'm browsing, I notice things but don't have time to correct them?  Good work all.