Talk:Alliance for Global Unity

Needs more info
Only contains the information from the first of the three-part series. -- Gvsualan (03/22/05 | 16:16 EST)

Peer review
I think this has a lot of potential, and I know it needs copyediting and possibly more information, but I want to see what people think of its current structure. This was a great story arc that deserves to have an article that does it justice. --Vedek Dukat Talk 22:34, 19 Nov 2005 (UTC)
 * Looks good mostly. As you said, some copyediting needs to be done - maybe I can help tomorrow - and one thing I don't like is the way it discusses Li Nalas at the beginning of a new paragraph. That makes him the main focus, as opposed to a note about him being the only real threat to Jaro's power, if that makes any sense. As for Bajoran episodes, they were pretty good overally (some were boring), but the whole Dukat/Winn B-story in the final episodes was just a big distraction I found myself fast-forwarding through. :-P Weyoun 07:14, 20 Nov 2005 (UTC)


 * Hmm... Good point. I haven't gotten around to copyediting that section, but you're right about Li Nalas now that I think about it. --Vedek Dukat Talk 19:09, 20 Nov 2005 (UTC)