Talk:Escape maneuver one

Wrong POV, mixes in-universe and realworld contexts. -- Renegade54 20:16, 4 December 2007 (UTC)
 * I rewrote it. Now it is an all-in-verse POV. I think it looks better, what do you think?-- Rom Ulan Hail 22:24, 4 December 2007 (UTC)