Talk:Akritirian

Clamp separation
Changed brief reference to the clamp, and created separate page, Akritirian clamp. --Short Circuit 01:58, 25 Jun 2005 (UTC)

Star Wars connection
Coincidence?  Gonk  ( Gonk! ) 23:16, 25 April 2007 (UTC)


 * I removed said reference: "The Akritirians are named after Akrit'tar, an Imperial prison planet in ." Pending further citation. --Alan 15:10, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Odd Phrasing?
This is an oddly worded article in places. It reads as if written by someone trying to impress an English teacher with their verbiage. Especially the following quote: "When Voyager's master and commander, Captain Kathryn Janeway". All of it seems accurate, and is (almost exceedingly) "proper" English, so no changes have been made to the actual article, but I think it read strangely. Is there a MA policy regarding this?Hossrex 07:54, 26 October 2007 (UTC)
 * No. --Alan 15:10, February 13, 2010 (UTC)