Talk:Antarian Trans-stellar Rally

Incomplete
Needs some more info on why the Trans-stellar rally existed, its route etc.. -- Q 09:03, 20 Mar 2005 (EST)

Content?
Some of it reads more like an episode summary than an article describing the "rally" (in general, or the 2377 event specifically) itself. Should parts of the content be moved to the episode article? -- Cid Highwind 12:04, 8 September 2006 (UTC)

Clarification: I'm referring mainly to the last two subsections ("The Conspiracy", "The Race Resumes"). While the other two subsections of the "2377 rally" section focus on that event, these rather focus on only semi-related events happening at the same time. If this was an article about a real event, for example, I wouldn't expect to read about personal issues between two of the participants. There also seem to be some problems with tense and general phrasing, which might amplify the impression I got. -- Cid Highwind 12:56, 8 September 2006 (UTC)
 * I see what you are saying. I think I'll try to re-write this a little. --Bp 18:26, 8 September 2006 (UTC)